Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan

Exercise 9

Major and minor ideas are mixed together in the two paragraphs outlined below. Put the ideas in logical order by filling in the outlines.
1. Topic sentence: People can be classified by how they treat their cars.
Seldom wax or vacuum car
Keep every mechanical item in top shape
Protective owners
Ignore needed maintenance
Indifferent owners
Wash and polish car every week
Never wash, wax, or vacuum car
Abusive owners
Inspect and service car only when required by state law
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b. _______________________________________________________________________
(2) _______________________________________________________________________
a. _______________________________________________________________________
b. _______________________________________________________________________
(3) _______________________________________________________________________
a. _______________________________________________________________________
b. _______________________________________________________________________
2. Topic sentence: Living with an elderly parent has many benefits.
Advantages for elderly person
Live-in caretaker
Learn about the past
Advantages for adult children
Serve useful role in family
Help with household tasks
Advantages for grandchildren
Stay active and interested in young people
More attention from adults
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a. _______________________________________________________________________
b. _______________________________________________________________________
(2) _______________________________________________________________________
a. _______________________________________________________________________
b. _______________________________________________________________________
(3) _______________________________________________________________________
a. _______________________________________________________________________
b. _______________________________________________________________________