Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan

Exercise 12

For each pair of sentences below, write TN beside the statement that is too narrow to be developed into a paragraph. Write OK beside the statement in each pair that could be developed into a paragraph.
1. _______ a. Employers notice how applicants dress for a job interview.
_______ b. First impressions are important in a job interview.
2. _______ a. Sophia plans to audition for American Idol.
_______ b. Sophia is destined for stardom.
3. _______ a. Jerome left college to serve in the U.S. Army, but now he is back to earn a degree in computer programming.
_______ b. Some people "stop out" of college, and then they return more determined.
4. _______ a. There are many different attractions at Walt Disney World.
_______ b. Water park enthusiasts can enjoy Typhoon Lagoon and Blizzard Beach.
5. _______ a. My daughter Celia has the potential to become a college athlete.
_______ b. Celia holds the state track record for the 400-meter dash.