Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan

Exercise 1

Each of the following paragraphs needs specific details to back up its supporting points. In the spaces provided, add a sentence or two of realistic details for each supporting point. The more specific you are, the more convincing your details are likely to be.
1. A Pushover Instructor
We knew after the first few classes that the instructor was a pushover. First of all, he didn't seem able to control the class.
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In addition, he made some course requirements easier when a few students complained.
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Finally, he gave the easiest quiz we had ever taken.
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2. Helping a Parent in College
There are several ways a family can help a parent who is attending college. First, family members can take over some of the household chores that the parent usually does.
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Also, family members can make sure that the student has some quiet study time.
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Last, families can take an interest in the student's problems and accomplishments.
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