
Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan
Edition 2ISBN: 978-0077662158
Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan
Edition 2ISBN: 978-0077662158 Exercise 13
Use a combination of time and emphatic order to arrange the scrambled list of sentences below. Write the number 1 beside the point that all the other sentences support. Then number each supporting sentence. Paying close attention to transitional words and phrases will help you organize and connect the supporting sentences.
_______ For months, I dreamt of gigantic spiders crawling into my bed and devouring me.
_______ I saw the bandage on his hand and the puffy swelling when the bandage was removed.
_______ My most traumatic experience with spiders happened when another friend and I were hiking in the mountains.
_______ For an hour afterward, I constantly rubbed the fingers of my hand to reassure myself that the spider was no longer there.
_______ The first experience was the time I stayed up late to watch the horror movie Tarantula.
_______ As we approached several bushes, I felt a presence on my left hand.
_______ I had three experiences that are the cause of my arachnophobia, a terrible and uncontrollable fear of spiders.
_______ For several weeks afterward, I saw the ugly red scab on my friend's hand and the yellow pus that continued oozing from under the scab.
_______ Almost completely covering my finger was a monstrous brown spider, with white stripes running down each of a seemingly endless number of long, furry legs.
_______ I even imagined seeing these hairy, vicious creatures every time I turned a corner.
_______ After my three experiences, I suspect that my fear of spiders will be with me until I die.
_______ I did not see the spider but visited my friend in the hospital, where he suffered through a few days of nausea and dizziness because of the poison.
_______ I cried out "Arghh!" and flicked my hand violently back and forth to shake off the spider.
_______ The second experience was the time when my best friend received a bite from a black widow spider.
_______ For a long, horrible second it clung stickily, as if permanently intertwined among the fingers of my hand, but then it flew off my hand.
_______ For months, I dreamt of gigantic spiders crawling into my bed and devouring me.
_______ I saw the bandage on his hand and the puffy swelling when the bandage was removed.
_______ My most traumatic experience with spiders happened when another friend and I were hiking in the mountains.
_______ For an hour afterward, I constantly rubbed the fingers of my hand to reassure myself that the spider was no longer there.
_______ The first experience was the time I stayed up late to watch the horror movie Tarantula.
_______ As we approached several bushes, I felt a presence on my left hand.
_______ I had three experiences that are the cause of my arachnophobia, a terrible and uncontrollable fear of spiders.
_______ For several weeks afterward, I saw the ugly red scab on my friend's hand and the yellow pus that continued oozing from under the scab.
_______ Almost completely covering my finger was a monstrous brown spider, with white stripes running down each of a seemingly endless number of long, furry legs.
_______ I even imagined seeing these hairy, vicious creatures every time I turned a corner.
_______ After my three experiences, I suspect that my fear of spiders will be with me until I die.
_______ I did not see the spider but visited my friend in the hospital, where he suffered through a few days of nausea and dizziness because of the poison.
_______ I cried out "Arghh!" and flicked my hand violently back and forth to shake off the spider.
_______ The second experience was the time when my best friend received a bite from a black widow spider.
_______ For a long, horrible second it clung stickily, as if permanently intertwined among the fingers of my hand, but then it flew off my hand.
Explanation
Organizing through a Combination of Time...
Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan
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