Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan

Exercise 28

Combine the simple sentences in each group into one sentence by using adjectives or verbs in a series and by omitting repeated words. In most cases, use a comma between the adjectives or verbs in a series.
1. Jackie carefully looked into her rear view mirror before leaving the driveway.
She locked her car door.
She strapped on her seat belt.
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2. I downloaded several games to my laptop.
The games were free.
The games require role playing.
The laptop is new.
The laptop is a Dell.
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3. Steve picked up the phone.
He cleared his throat.
He dialed Angelina's number.
He cleared his throat again.
He hung up before the first ring.
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4. The applicant entered the room.
She was confident.
She was applying for a job.
The room was large.
The room was designated for the interview.
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5. The pasta was served with a sauce.
The pasta was freshly made.
The pasta was linguini.
The sauce was pesto.
The sauce was topped with roasted pine nuts.
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