
Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan
Edition 2ISBN: 978-0077662158
Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan
Edition 2ISBN: 978-0077662158 Exercise 27
Combine each of the following groups of simple sentences into one longer sentence. Omit repeated words. Various combinations are often possible, so try to find a combination in each group that flows most smoothly and clearly.
EXAMPLE
The technician arrived at the scene.
The technician worked for a crime lab.
The technician needed to dust for fingerprints.
1. Sophie had repaired her broken watchband with a paper clip.
The clip snapped.
The watch slid off her wrist.
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2. The physical therapist watched.
Julie tried to stand on her weakened legs.
They crumpled under her.
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3. There were parking spaces on the street.
Richie pulled into an expensive garage.
He did not want to risk damage to his new car.
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4. The truck was speeding.
The truck was brown.
The truck skidded on some ice.
The truck almost hit a police officer.
The police officer was startled.
The police officer was young.
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5. The rainstorm flooded our basement.
The rainstorm was sudden.
The rainstorm was terrible.
It knocked slates off the roof.
It uprooted a young tree.
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EXAMPLE
The technician arrived at the scene.
The technician worked for a crime lab.
The technician needed to dust for fingerprints.

1. Sophie had repaired her broken watchband with a paper clip.
The clip snapped.
The watch slid off her wrist.
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
2. The physical therapist watched.
Julie tried to stand on her weakened legs.
They crumpled under her.
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
3. There were parking spaces on the street.
Richie pulled into an expensive garage.
He did not want to risk damage to his new car.
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
4. The truck was speeding.
The truck was brown.
The truck skidded on some ice.
The truck almost hit a police officer.
The police officer was startled.
The police officer was young.
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
5. The rainstorm flooded our basement.
The rainstorm was sudden.
The rainstorm was terrible.
It knocked slates off the roof.
It uprooted a young tree.
_________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________
Explanation
Varying Your Sentences (286-287)
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Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan
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