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Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan

Edition 2ISBN: 978-0077662158
book Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan cover

Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan

Edition 2ISBN: 978-0077662158
Exercise 12
Look at the opening words in each sentence and ask, Who The subject that answers the question should be nearby in the sentence. If it is not, provide the logical subject by using either method of correction just described.
EXAMPLE
While pitching his tent, a snake bit Parker on the ankle.
While Parker was pitching his tent, a snake bit him on the ankle.
Or: While pitching his tent, Parker was bitten on the ankle by a snake.
1. Dancing on their hind legs, the audience cheered wildly as the elephants paraded by.
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2. Last seen wearing dark glasses and a blond wig, the police spokesperson said the suspect was still being sought.
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3. Pouring out the cereal, a coupon fell into my bowl of milk.
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4. Escorted by dozens of police motorcycles, I knew the limousine carried someone important.
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5. Tired and exasperated, the fight we had was inevitable.
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6. Packed tightly in a tiny can, Joe had difficulty removing the anchovies.
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7. Kicked carelessly under the bed, Raquel finally found her sneakers.
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8. Working at the copy machine, the morning dragged on.
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9. Sitting at a sidewalk café, all sorts of interesting people passed by.
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10. Though somewhat warped, Uncle Zeke played his records from the forties.
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Explanation
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