Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan

Exercise 20

Write MM for misplaced modifier or C for correct in the space provided for each sentence.
1. While in Vegas, I almost spent fi ve hundred dollars at one slot machine.
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2. While in Vegas, I spent almost fi ve hundred dollars at one slot machine.
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3. Roberto patiently waited as the meal he ordered was being prepared in the kitchen.
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4. Roberto patiently waited as the meal was being prepared in the kitchen he ordered.
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5. Kimberly registered for her two summer classes on Monday.
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6. On Monday, Kimberly registered for her two summer classes.
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7. Behind the sofa, the dog hid the biscuit that was given to him by his owner.
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8. The dog hid the biscuit that was given to him by his owner behind the sofa.
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9. I ordered a new hard drive that was refurbished from the Web site.
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10. I ordered from the Web site a new hard drive that was refurbished.
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