Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan

Exercise 95

EDITING TEST 11
Each underlined area in the résumé excerpt below contains a sentenceskills mistake. Identify the mistake and write its item number in the appropriate space in the box below. Then correct the mistake in the space above each error.
Missing capital letter: _____, _____
Dangling modifier: _____
Faulty parallelism: _____
Fragment: _____, _____
Inconsistent verb tense: _____
Run-on: _____
Apostrophe mistake: _____
Missing comma: _____
Alyssa Leong
1 597 bagley Street
2 Torrance CA 90501
Phone: [phone]
OBJECTIVE : I hope to find a position as a certified nurse assistant at a nursing facility that will offer me rewarding work, 3 hours that are full time, and medical benefits.
QUALIFICATIONS : 4 Caring, competent, and hard working , my experience caring for people is present. 5 Having volunteered at an adult residential care home for two years. I am aware of the responsibilities for providing basic care. 6 At the care home. 7 I helped staff members and sometimes fed, bathed, and dress clients. 8 My supervisors' encouraged me to enroll in a certified nursing assistant program. 9 In 2008, I completed a sixmonth training, I also received my CNA certification.
EDUCATION:
2002-2006 Diploma, Roosevelt High School
2008 Certified Nursing Assistant Program, Los Angeles Adult Community School
WORK HISTORY:
Volunteer. 10 South central adult residential Care Home (9/2006 to 6/2008)
Assisted clients with personal hygiene and recreational activities Provided companionship