Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan

Exercise 103

EDITING TEST 12
Each numbered line in the résumé below contains a sentence-skills mistake. Identify the mistake and write its item number in the appropriate space in the box below. Then correct the mistake in the space above each error.
Missing capital letter: _____, _____
Spelling error: _____
Missing comma: _____
Inconsistent verb tense: _____
Homonym mistake: _____
Missing - s ending: _____, _____
Apostrophe error: _____, _____
Kalani Bowers
1 203 Mahogany avenue
2 St. Louis MO 63103
Phone: [phone]
3 Objective: I wish to find a full-time sales position with an oportunity for advancement and personal growth.
Work History:
Inventory Clerk at Dave's TV Appliance • St. Louis, MO • 2004 to present
Responsibilities:
• 4 Used a computer system to catalog and monitor inventory (electronics and appliance)
• 5 Conducted quarterly physical inventories'
Data Entry Clerk at CPK Trading Company • St. Louis, MO • 2001 to 2004
• 6 Processed payments and invoice
• 7 Maintain and audited numerous databases
• 8 Entered daily sales receipts for too branch locations
• 9 Generated reports' and memoranda
Education:
St. Anthony's High School • Columbia, MO
• Graduated June 2001
Special Skills:
• Experienced with Windows, Word, and Excel
• 10 c.p.r. Certified