Exploring Writing 2nd Edition by John Langan

Exercise 121

There are 15 incorrect words or phrases in the following paragraph.
Rewrite the paragraph to correct word-use problems in the margins and between the lines.
Young people today have quiet a few advantages beyond what they're parents and grandparents had. Beside computers and cell phones, they have a hole shelf full of gadgets that make there life's easier. For example, to brake up the monotony of waiting in a doctor's office, at a bus stop, or in a long line at the grocery store, they plug in their iPods and listen to the latest tunes, for ours if they have to. In addition, they have an easier time communicating with friends then there parents did. When they are not able to hang out with the guys, they simply transmit them a email or text message. Last but not least, technology has made it possible for them to download hundreds of hot songs and videos, so finding an endless supply of entertainment is a breeze.