English Skills 10th Edition by John Langan, Zoe Albright

Exercise 34

And since revision can occur at any stage of the writing process, including editing, Gene makes one of his details more vivid by adding the descriptive words "____________."
All that remained for Gene to do was to enter his corrections, print out the final draft of the paragraph, and proofread it for any typos or other careless errors. He was then ready to hand it in to his instructor.