Essentials of Business Communication 8th Edition by Mary Ellen Guffey

Exercise 32

Your Task. Revise the following wordy, unorganized paragraphs. Include an introductory statement followed by a bulleted or numbered list. Look for ways to eliminate unnecessary wording.
Winning the lottery can bring a colossal chunk of income. What would you do if you had won the lottery and come home with mega millions? Smart winners can save their sanity and their cash, as well as live well for years into the future if they take precautionary steps. Step No. 1 is staying anonymous. Don't broadcast your good news because long-lost friends and relatives become vultures, all seeking handouts. A second step involves seeking out a tax pro immediately. You may think you have a huge chunk of money to spend, but the government will be taking a hefty hunk. You need a tax expert to help minimize the tax burden. Experts also warn against making immediate and major changes in your lifestyle within six months after winning. Examples: quitting your job, buying yachts, or purchasing European castles.