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College Writing Skills with Readings 8th Edition by John Langan

Edition 8ISBN: 978-0073371665
book College Writing Skills with Readings 8th Edition by John Langan cover

College Writing Skills with Readings 8th Edition by John Langan

Edition 8ISBN: 978-0073371665
Exercise 86
Again, you will practice changing vague, indefinite writing into lively, image-filled writing that helps capture the reader's interest and makes your meaning clear. With the help of the methods described on pages 116-117, add specific details to the five sentences that follow. Note the two examples.
EXAMPLES
he person got off the bus.
The teenage boy bounded down the steps of the shiny yellow school bus.
She worked hard all summer.
All summer, Eva sorted peaches and blueberries in the hot, noisy canning factory.
The woman was overjoyed at finding her lost son.
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