Business and Administrative Communication 10th Edition by Kitty Locker,Donna Kienzler

Exercise 28

Revise each of the following sentences to create parallelism.
1. The orientation session will cover the following information: Company culture will be discussed.
How to use the equipment.
You will get an overview of key customers' needs.
2 Five criteria for a good web page are content that serves the various audiences, attention to details, and originality. It is also important to have effective organization and navigation devices. Finally, pro­vide attention to details such as revision date and the webmaster's address.
3. When you leave a voice mail message,
Summarize your main point in a sentence or two.
The name and phone number should be given slowly and distinctly.
The speaker should give enough information so that the recipient can act on the message.
Tell when you'll be available to receive the recipient's return call.