Effective Writing 10th Edition by Claire May,Gordon May

Exercise 4

The meaning of the following sentences is not clear. Revise the sentences so that they are unambiguous and precise.
1. The unexpected retirement of six auditors created a heavier workload for the remaining staff, causing them to miss several deadlines. This is a problem.
2. The branch office will be located at a new cite.
3. The stock's price dropped by a negligent amount.
4. This product is unique. Only two manufacturers produce it.
5. The HB Transportation Company's improved position is due to decreasing fuel prices and the company's response in increasing prices.
6. Expense recognition states that once a cost expires, we should recognize expense.
7. After calculating the tax effects, the selling price of the property seemed more reasonable.
8. This policy is based on a logical rational.
9. The FASB has not officially written a pronouncement on the handling of requisition costs.
10. These financial statements upset two accounting standards.