Effective Writing 10th Edition by Claire May,Gordon May

Exercise 8

Revise the following sentences, as needed, using the guidelines covered in this chapter.
1. The letter was dated May 8 2014 and mailed from Boston Massachusetts.
2. The guidelines will explain who is eligible for the benefits, costs, and how to apply.
3. We have increased our advertising thus we hope to sell more of our product.
4. The report was signed by the controller the internal auditor and the vice president.
5. Neither Susan nor Lisa are on the committee.
6. This is the employee's parking lot.
7. Either the computers or the printer are malfunctioning.
8. The benefits of this health insurance policy is obvious to employees.
9. We review the client's system of internal control. Then we will recommend ways to improve it.
10. Three new procedures were used to improve the internal control system. This was the responsibility of Hugh Tran.