Business Communication 9th Edition by Amy Newman

Exercise 25

Insert transitions for paragraph coherence.
Insert logical transitions in the blanks to give the following paragraph coherence.
Bits 'n' Bytes is widening its lead over Desktop Computing in the computermagazine war. ______ its revenues increased 27% last year, whereas Desktop Computing's increased only 16%. ______ its audited paid circulation increased to 600,000, compared to 450,000 for Desktop Computing. ______ Desktop Computing was able to increase both the ad rate and the number of ad pages last year. One note of worry ______ is Desktop Computing's decision to shut down its independent testing laboratory. Some industry leaders believe much of Desktop Computing's success has been due to its reliable product reviews. ______ Bits 'n' Bytes has just announced an agreement whereby Stanford University's world-famous engineering school will perform product testing for Bits 'n' Bytes.