Business Communication 8th Edition by Amy Newman,Scot Ober

Exercise 11

Write clearly and avoid slang.
These two sentences are filled with business slang and clichés. Revise them using simple, clear language.
Using the synergies amongst our competitors, we can formulate a program that not only capitalizes on the strengths of each of our respective constituencies but that raises the bar to a new level for each and every one of us.
At the end of the day, we need to think outside the box to look for low-hanging fruit, or we'll never reach our end goal.