Question 1

Which of the following is not an important question you should consider when drafting and revising an illustration paragraph?

Accepted Answer

A)  Are any words redundant? 
B)  Do I need more or better transitions? 
C)  Should some of the details be more specific? 
D)  Should I add more details to support my points? 
A)  Are any words redundant? 
B)  Do I need more or better transitions? 
C)  Should some of the details be more specific? 
D)  Should I add more details to support my points? A

Question 2

Create four specific examples for each broad statement.
-The mall is more than just a place to shop.

Accepted Answer

1. The mall is a social gathering place where people can meet up with friends and family, grab a bite to eat at the food court, and catch up on each other's lives.
2. The mall often hosts events and activities such as live music performances, art exhibits, and fitness classes, making it a hub for entertainment and cultural experiences.
3. Many malls have indoor playgrounds and interactive areas for children, making it a family-friendly destination for kids to play and have fun.
4. The mall is also a convenient location for various services such as hair salons, nail spas, and dry cleaning, providing a one-stop destination for errands and self-care needs.

Question 3

Add three details to each topic sentence for an illustration paragraph.
-Social networking sites can be a negative influence for some people.

Accepted Answer

Social networking sites can be a negative influence for some people. For example, excessive use of social media can lead to feelings of loneliness and isolation, as individuals may spend more time online than engaging in face-to-face interactions. Additionally, cyberbullying and online harassment are prevalent on social networking sites, which can have detrimental effects on mental health. Furthermore, the constant comparison to others' curated lives on social media can lead to feelings of inadequacy and low self-esteem.

Question 4

Create a topic sentence for each group of details.
-Many colleges offer voice lessons.
Students can take beginner, intermediate, and advanced piano lessons.
Students receive college credit for performing in the marching band.
The most talented singers may audition for the college choir.
The pep band travels with the athletes and performs at games.
Musicians represent the college in parades and other special events.

Accepted Answer

Many colleges offer a variety of music p

Question 5

Create four specific examples for each broad statement.
-Smartphones have become a necessity in many people's lives.

Accepted Answer

1. Communication: Smartphones allow peop

Question 6

Write journal entries using illustration.
-What does it mean to be a successful _____________________________________?
Fill in the blank to answer the question, and then give examples to support your point

Accepted Answer

successful entrepreneur

Being a success

Question 7

Illustration uses ____ examples to support a general point.

Accepted Answer

A)  broad 
B)  transitional 
C)  specific 
D)  visual 
A)  broad 
B)  transitional 
C)  specific 
D)  visual

Question 8

Add three appropriate details that support the following topic sentences.
-Many people get nervous when they must speak to a large audience.

Accepted Answer

1. Public speaking can trigger physical

Question 9

Which of the following specific examples does not illustrate this general statement?
Getting involved in a club or organization on campus is easy.

Accepted Answer

A)  Students can sign up for activities at a booth during the first week of the semester. 
B)  Students can drop in on a meeting and introduce themselves. 
C)  Students can check out posters or flyers to learn about upcoming events. 
D)  Students who get involved in a club or organization are more likely to graduate. 
A)  Students can sign up for activities at a booth during the first week of the semester. 
B)  Students can drop in on a meeting and introduce themselves. 
C)  Students can check out posters or flyers to learn about upcoming events. 
D)  Students who get involved in a club or organization are more likely to graduate.

Question 10

Add three appropriate details that support the following topic sentences.
-Listening to music is a great way to relax.

Accepted Answer

1. Music has been shown to lower stress

Question 11

In an illustration paragraph, you support a ____ with specific examples.

Accepted Answer

A)  general statement 
B)  journal entry 
C)  list of ideas 
D)  draft 
A)  general statement 
B)  journal entry 
C)  list of ideas 
D)  draft

Question 12

Write journal entries using illustration.
-What should a new ______________ know about ___________________________?
Fill in the blanks to answer the question, and the give examples to support your point

Accepted Answer

Write journal entries using illustration

Question 13

Which of the following examples does not support this general statement? Our neighbors showed my family how much they cared when our home was destroyed by a fire.

Accepted Answer

A)  We have several generous neighbors. 
B)  Ms. Jones cooked meals for us each day. 
C)  The Williams family let us sleep in their guest bedroom. 
D)  Mr. Parker supplied lumber to rebuild our house. 
A)  We have several generous neighbors. 
B)  Ms. Jones cooked meals for us each day. 
C)  The Williams family let us sleep in their guest bedroom. 
D)  Mr. Parker supplied lumber to rebuild our house.

Question 14

Which of the following is not an effective transition for an illustration paragraph?

Accepted Answer

A)  for example 
B)  such as 
C)  in addition 
D)  immediately 
A)  for example 
B)  such as 
C)  in addition 
D)  immediately

Question 15

Add three details to each topic sentence for an illustration paragraph.
-Social networking sites can be a source of valuable information.

Accepted Answer

Social networking sites can be a source

Question 16

Create a topic sentence for each group of details.
-My daughter is involved in several sports with practice after school.
My husband works late almost every day.
The baby usually takes a nap just before dark.
I am exhausted after working all day, so I go to bed early.
The family eats together only during holidays and special occasions.

Accepted Answer

Despite our busy schedules, we

Question 17

A good prewriting technique for creating a topic sentence for an illustration paragraph is ____.

Accepted Answer

A)  circling sense details 
B)  arranging details in emphatic order 
C)  making an announcement 
D)  looking for related ideas in a freewrite 
A)  circling sense details 
B)  arranging details in emphatic order 
C)  making an announcement 
D)  looking for related ideas in a freewrite

Question 18

Add three appropriate details that support the following topic sentences.
-Planning a vacation can be stressful.

Accepted Answer

1. Researching and booking accommodation

Question 19

____ are words, phrases, or sentences that connect one idea to another.

Accepted Answer

A)  Specific statements 
B)  Transitions 
C)  General statements 
D)  Topics 
A)  Specific statements 
B)  Transitions 
C)  General statements 
D)  Topics

Question 20

Create four specific examples for each broad statement.
-The student body on college campuses has become quite diverse.

Accepted Answer

1. Ethnic diversity: There are students

Exam 2: Illustration

Which of the following is not an important question you should consider when drafting and revising an illustration paragraph?

Create four specific examples for each broad statement. -The mall is more than just a place to shop.

Add three details to each topic sentence for an illustration paragraph. -Social networking sites can be a negative influence for some people.

Create four specific examples for each broad statement. -Smartphones have become a necessity in many people's lives.

Write journal entries using illustration. -What does it mean to be a successful _____________________________________? Fill in the blank to answer the question, and then give examples to support your point

Illustration uses ____ examples to support a general point.

Add three appropriate details that support the following topic sentences. -Many people get nervous when they must speak to a large audience.

Which of the following specific examples does not illustrate this general statement? Getting involved in a club or organization on campus is easy.

Add three appropriate details that support the following topic sentences. -Listening to music is a great way to relax.

In an illustration paragraph, you support a ____ with specific examples.

Write journal entries using illustration. -What should a new ______________ know about ___________________________? Fill in the blanks to answer the question, and the give examples to support your point

Which of the following examples does not support this general statement? Our neighbors showed my family how much they cared when our home was destroyed by a fire.

Which of the following is not an effective transition for an illustration paragraph?

Add three details to each topic sentence for an illustration paragraph. -Social networking sites can be a source of valuable information.

A good prewriting technique for creating a topic sentence for an illustration paragraph is ____.

Add three appropriate details that support the following topic sentences. -Planning a vacation can be stressful.

____ are words, phrases, or sentences that connect one idea to another.

Create four specific examples for each broad statement. -The student body on college campuses has become quite diverse.

Writing a Paragraph

Description

Narration

Process

Comparison or Contrast

Classification

Definition

Cause and Effect

Argument

Writing an Essay

Different Essay Patterns: Part I

Different Essay Patterns: Part II

Using Research to Strengthen Essays

Writing From Reading

The Simple Sentence

Beyond the Simple Sentence: Coordination

Avoiding Run-Ons and Comma Splices

Beyond the Simple Sentence: Subordination

Avoiding Sentence Fragments

Using Parallelism in Sentences

Using Adjectives and Adverbs

Correcting Problems With Modifiers

Using Verbs Correctly

Making Subjects and Verbs Agree

Using Pronouns Correctly: Agreement and Reference

Using Pronouns Correctly: Consistency and Case

Punctuation

Spelling

Words That Sound Alikelook Alike

Word Choice

Sentence Variety

Filters

Write journal entries using illustration. -What should a new know about _____________? Fill in the blanks to answer the question, and the give examples to support your point