Rewrite This Résumé According to Current Guidelines for Effective Résumé

Essay

Rewrite this résumé according to current guidelines for effective résumé writing. Assume the position being applied for is a marketing analyst for a foreign electric car company trying to enter the Canadian market. Feel free to create some new facts to help create a more effective résumé.
Sharon Bueller
859 Marlo Avenue
Winnipeg, MB
[phone]
[e-mail]
PERSONAL: Married, in good health, 5'6", 155 lbs.; hobbies include cooking, music, and reading.
JOB OBJECTIVE: To obtain a responsible position in market analysis with a good company.
Education: MBA degree, University of Manitoba, 2001.
Graduated with a 3.0 average. Member of the varsity cheer leading squad. President of Helvetica League. Was voted as Miss Congeniality at the provincial exhibition.
WORK EXPERIENCE
McShear Aeronautics, 2004 to now, marketing analyst
Responsible for promotional activities.