Rewrite the Following Sentences to Make the Mean Clear and Concise

Essay

Rewrite the following sentences to make the mean clear and concise.
a. Larry Jones, the plant manager, plans to meet with employees on November 12; and the purpose of the meeting is to describe the new medical insurance program that is to be changed the first of the year to provide considerably more coverage at lower cost.
b. When mowing the yard, a bee stung Robin, our neighbor.