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book College Writing Skills with Readings 8th Edition by John Langan cover

College Writing Skills with Readings 8th Edition by John Langan

Edition 8ISBN: 978-0073371665
book College Writing Skills with Readings 8th Edition by John Langan cover

College Writing Skills with Readings 8th Edition by John Langan

Edition 8ISBN: 978-0073371665
Exercise 53
______ In the spaces below this paragraph, write the numbers of the ten word groups that contain fragments or run-ons. Then, in the spaces between the lines, edit by making the necessary corrections. One is done for you as an example.
A unique object in my family's living room is an ashtray.
______ In the spaces below this paragraph, write the numbers of the ten word groups that contain fragments or run-ons. Then, in the spaces between the lines, edit by making the necessary corrections. One is done for you as an example. A unique object in my family's living room is an ashtray.     I made in second grade. I can still remember the pride I felt. When I presented it to my mother. Now, I'm amazed that my parents didn't hide it away at the back of a shelf it is a remarkably ugly object. The ashtray is made out of brown clay that I had tried to mold into a perfect circle, unfortunately my class was only forty-five minutes long. The best I could do was to shape it into a lopsided oval. Its most distinctive feature, though, is the grooves carved into its rim. I had theorized that each groove could hold a cigarette or cigar, I made at least fifty of them. I somehow failed to consider that the only person who smoked in my family was my father. Who smoked about five cigars a year. Further, although our living room is decorated in sedate tans and blues, my ashtray is bright purple. My favorite color at the time. For variety, it has stripes around its rim they are colored neon green. My parents have proudly displayed my little masterpiece on their coffee table for the past ten years. If I ever wonder if my parents love me. I look at that ugly ashtray, the answer is plain to see. I made in second grade. I can still remember the pride I felt. When I presented it to my mother. Now, I'm amazed that my parents didn't hide it away at the back of a shelf it is a remarkably ugly object. The ashtray is made out of brown clay that I had tried to mold into a perfect circle, unfortunately my class was only forty-five minutes long. The best I could do was to shape it into a lopsided oval. Its most distinctive feature, though, is the grooves carved into its rim. I had theorized that each groove could hold a cigarette or cigar, I made at least fifty of them. I somehow failed to consider that the only person who smoked in my family was my father. Who smoked about five cigars a year. Further, although our living room is decorated in sedate tans and blues, my ashtray is bright purple. My favorite color at the time. For variety, it has stripes around its rim they are colored neon green. My parents have proudly displayed my little masterpiece on their coffee table for the past ten years. If I ever wonder if my parents love me. I look at that ugly ashtray, the answer is plain to see.
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College Writing Skills with Readings 8th Edition by John Langan
Chapter 1: An Introduction to Writing
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Chapter 2: The Writing Process
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Chapter 3: The First and Second Steps in Essay Writing
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Chapter 4: The Third Step in Essay Writing
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Chapter 5: The Fourth Step in Essay Writing
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Chapter 6: Four Bases for Revising Essays
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Chapter 7: Description
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Chapter 8: Narration
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Chapter 9: Exemplifi Cation
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Chapter 10: Process
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Chapter 11: Cause and Effect
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Chapter 12: Comparison or Contrast
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Chapter 13: Definition
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Chapter 14: Division-Classifi Cation
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Chapter 15: Argument
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Chapter 16: Taking Essay Exams
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