TD Bank Financial Group

Multiple Choice

TD Bank Financial Group
Thom Hollis works as a financial advisor for TD Bank Financial Group. His job involves providing investment advice to many clients, in person or on the phone, and writing many letters and e-mails. He has an appointment tomorrow with Ji-Wan, a client, to review her personal investment portfolio. Before she comes in, Thom has to review her profile, decide what changes to suggest, and put together a proposed portfolio. He has a recent finance diploma, but because he is still relatively new to his job, he wants to collect as much information as he can on appropriate investments for her, so he decides to send an e-mail to Alyson, his manager, to see if she has any suggestions or advice. Besides preparing for his meeting with Ji-Wan, Thom has several other tasks he must work on.
-As Thom proofreads his letter, he notices a serious writing error in the following sentence and decides to revise it. What kind of sentence error is this? I hope to be able to assist you. In my position with TD Bank Financial Group.

A) run-on sentence
B) sentence fragment
C) comma-splice
D) wordy expression