Exam 5: Revising Your Writing

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Which of the following is not a passive sentence?

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How can you achieve a confident writing style?

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Short and simple words help business writers

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Which sentence has the lowest "lard factor"?

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Revise the following sentences to conform to standard business communication principles.Add appropriate details as needed to complete the ideas. a. I'd like to take this opportunity to thank you for your participation in our focus group last week. b. During the year 2003, the Smith Corporation bought a new building for the amount of $15 million. c. If we do not plan ahead for national security, past history will repeat itself again with severe consequences. d. Each and every customer receives a free gift when opening a checking account. e. The new sick-leave policy was implemented due to the fact that several employees were abusing the privilege. f.In the event that the customer makes a payment in the amount of $500, the company will not report her to a credit agency. g.We held a meeting yesterday so Terry could make a demonstration of the new computer system. h. After the dean made an analysis of the college's budget, the department chairs came to an agreement on how to decrease expenditures. i. There are fewer than 500 people who are admitted to the nursing program per year.

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To build goodwill in a business letter,use neutral expressions such as cannot and will not.

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The three basic sentence types are compound-complex,complex,and simple.

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Which guideline about confident writing is correct?

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Revise these sentences to conform to standard business communication principles.Add details as needed. Revise these sentences to conform to standard business communication principles.Add details as needed.    a.If you want to order a copy of the training video, call 1-800-555-1234. b.I hope that my analogies help you understand the hierarchical structure of a file server. c.Perhaps you'd like to try the facial cream for a 30-day trial period. You might be pleased with the results. d.I realize that you are a busy account executive, but we would appreciate your completing this questionnaire. e.I know that my qualifications are worthy of an interview. f.Customers like you are this company's most valuable asset. g.Surely you realize that our business can't exist if you do not pay your bills on time. h. I am very surprised that you didn't think you'd win the election for student body president. i. Assume you are comparing the following features of two computer systems. Write a sentence that emphasizes the best feature of each system. Then write a sentence that compares the two systems in terms of memory. Finally, write a sentence comparing them in terms of capacity and stating that the lower hard-drive space is sufficient for your needs. j. The well-written report was prepared by the new assistant. (Emphasize the doer of the action.) k. The female supervisor will discuss the dress code for male assistants. l. We need more manpower to get the project done on time. m. Businesswomen like the extended mall hours during the holiday season. n. Mr. Johnson and Emily Warden will attend the board meeting. o. Each restaurant waiter and waitress must purchase his or her own attire. p. Each student must submit his report by the end of the month. q. The plaintiff's 60-year-old Hispanic attorney is known for winning cases. r. The snack machine gypped me out of my money. s. Teresa and Mindy, two lesbian secretaries, are great proofreaders. t. I mailed the money order on Monday. u. We have already budgeted money for another charity. v. You failed to indicate the number of dependents on the tax form. w. You need more evidence to support your claim. a.If you want to order a copy of the training video, call 1-800-555-1234. b.I hope that my analogies help you understand the hierarchical structure of a file server. c.Perhaps you'd like to try the facial cream for a 30-day trial period. You might be pleased with the results. d.I realize that you are a busy account executive, but we would appreciate your completing this questionnaire. e.I know that my qualifications are worthy of an interview. f.Customers like you are this company's most valuable asset. g.Surely you realize that our business can't exist if you do not pay your bills on time. h. I am very surprised that you didn't think you'd win the election for student body president. i. Assume you are comparing the following features of two computer systems. Write a sentence that emphasizes the best feature of each system. Then write a sentence that compares the two systems in terms of memory. Finally, write a sentence comparing them in terms of capacity and stating that the lower hard-drive space is sufficient for your needs. j. The well-written report was prepared by the new assistant. (Emphasize the doer of the action.) k. The female supervisor will discuss the dress code for male assistants. l. We need more manpower to get the project done on time. m. Businesswomen like the extended mall hours during the holiday season. n. Mr. Johnson and Emily Warden will attend the board meeting. o. Each restaurant waiter and waitress must purchase his or her own attire. p. Each student must submit his report by the end of the month. q. The plaintiff's 60-year-old Hispanic attorney is known for winning cases. r. The snack machine gypped me out of my money. s. Teresa and Mindy, two lesbian secretaries, are great proofreaders. t. I mailed the money order on Monday. u. We have already budgeted money for another charity. v. You failed to indicate the number of dependents on the tax form. w. You need more evidence to support your claim.

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Completeness is the most important attribute of a business message.

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Two expressions that carry negative connotations are

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Although informal,slang expressions are vivid and widely understood.

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When your message emphasizes how you,as the writer,will benefit,you are applying the "you" attitude.

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Explain how the placement of an idea affects its emphasis.Discuss how much emphasis each section of a message receives,and provide examples of what types of information should be placed in each section.

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Which sentence includes only positive language?

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An expletive at the beginning of a sentence can make the subject of the sentence unclear.

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"Our school is buying both pens and pencils for students' use" is a sentence with proper parallel structure.

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Substitute a shorter word for each of the following: (a)enumerate,(b)recapitulate,(c)utilization,and (d)modification.Use each substitute word correctly in a sentence.

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Identify the sentence that contains specific,concrete language.

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Hidden verbs weaken sentences because they do not emphasize the main action.

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