Exam 5: Revising-Your-Writing

Combine the following two sentences into one sentence that subordinates the cost of the computer: "The computer system costs $3,850.Its efficiency will improve data entry productivity."

Which sentence does not contain a hidden verb?

Which sentence lacks parallelism?

The purpose of using transitional words is to integrate the discussion points and unify the paragraphs.

Which transition does not reflect a cause-and-effect relationship?

Using platitudes will give readers the sense that you have a condescending attitude.

By substituting a single word for a phrase,you are "getting rid of the lard" in a sentence.

Rewrite the following sentence using the active voice: "The manuscript was proofread by an English major."

When your message emphasizes how you,as the writer,will benefit,you are applying the "you" attitude.

Identify the sentence that best reflects the "you" attitude.

The purpose of parallel structure is to connect topic sentences and enhance the unity within a message.

In an active sentence,

Repeating a particular word in several sentences within a paragraph highlights separate ideas and demonstrates parallelism.

Which of the following statements about parallel structure is not true?

Which of the following is the least likely to be considered an unethical message?

Three mechanical ways to emphasize an idea are enumeration,indenting from the margin,and use of italics.

You can emphasize an idea by putting it into the first or last paragraph.

Instead of using a longer,somewhat vague word such as substantial,it is better to use a shorter,more specific word such as large.

When you use the active voice,you are emphasizing the doer rather than the receiver of the action in that sentence.

To subordinate additional information,you can place it in